Website Try 1 from TheLogoLoft

This was the first revision that i received yesterday...

I'm not going to lie i was disgusted by this.  This was thrown together in probably less than thirty minutes, and took them four days to get to me.  The red behind obstructees contradicts with logo, the newsletter and shopping cart are the most prominent things on the page, the banner is smooshed up in the right corner, the shopping cart links are obviously taken from a template, the "this week... only 15.95" is a trainwreck, it looks like the shirt below it is for sale.  There's about five different fonts being used... The list goes on but i figured thats all i was going to change for now.

I wrote them everything i wanted different, but as soon as i got done i opened up Photoshop and started making it myself.   

Oh they also sent me a business card design that looked like the top of the website... i'll end up redoing that too.  So if you're reading this blog looking to start your own website, i DO NOT recommend TheLogoLoft.